The Benefits of Participating in a Critique Group

Over the last several years, I have been a member of Women Writing the West which hosts an annual conference each year. I am looking forward to the online conference this October 2025. The title of the conference is From Quill to Keyboard. The online conference offers two days of workshops and networking opportunities. WWW also offers the Willa Literary Award, the Laura Short Fiction Award, and the Downing Journalism Award. Additionally, the organization has an active listserv on which members share ideas and advice. The group also organizes critique groups. I have participated in one for a few years.

Our WWW critique group began with four participants who were writing drafts of their novels. Eventually, this group devolved into just two of us, who have continued to work together on our drafts. We meet monthly on Zoom with the expectation that we will each provide about 2000 words for critique. The benefits I have derived are multiple. First, having a monthly critique meeting ensures that I will keep up with my writing in a steady fashion. Secondly, I have learned a lot from my partner who has already published two novels. And, thirdly, I feel that our regular meetings have provided personal as well as professional support—in fact, we have become long-distance friends.

Recently, I joined a poetry organization, Columbine Poets of Colorado, which offers a workshop and a critique group each month. The meetings have from four to eight participants. The participants are experienced poets and share helpful feedback and encouragement. What I have found is that listening to the types of feedback given and to who pays attention to what and how they express their opinion is teaching me about poetry in ways that are novel to me. Regarding the feedback that I have received personally, I value the fact that it points me to a need for careful research on the topics about which I am writing. It also expands my awareness of how I might select topics and forms.

While participating in a critique group can be helpful, it is important to consider which benefits you would like to incur from participation. First, identify which aspects or forms of your writing you would like to submit for a group review. Next, you might want to identify opportunities through local writing groups, think about whether you might prefer an in-person or online group, select a group that you think will meet your needs, and study how to provide useful and effective feedback. For example, check out a variety of books that have been published about critique groups. And, last, upon joining the group and participating in it for an appropriate amount of time, evaluate its effectiveness for you and for the other members.

My Writing Goals for 2025

1.     Continue to develop my poetry and connections with other poets:

Bardic Trails: The Talking Gourds/Bardic Trails is a monthly Zoom presentation of poets, followed by an open mic, which is broadcast from Telluride, Colorado. The well-loved Art Goodtimes is the host. On July 1, the speaker was Black Atticus (Joseph Woods), who is serving as the current Poet Laureate (2023-2025) of Knoxville, Tennessee. His poetry includes rap and spoken-word performances.

The Colorado Poetry Center: Beth Franklin, the director of the Colorado Poetry Center, offers an in-person, monthly session at the Boulder Bookstore. In June 2025, the CPC featured Emily Perez and Aimee Herman. Emily Pérez is the author of What Flies Want—winner of the Iowa Prize and a finalist for a Colorado Book Award; House of Sugar, House of Stone; and two chapbooks. She is co-editor of the anthology, The Long Devotion: Poets Writing Motherhood. Aimee Herman is the author of the young adult fiction novel Everything Grows, which won the Forward Reviews 2019 Silver Award for Best Young Adult Fiction. Aimee has also published two books of poetry: to go without blinking and meant to wake up feeling.

Columbine Poets: In June, I attended a Saturday workshop with the Columbine Poets led by Julie Cumming that focused on a deep dive into writing a villanelle—a form I had tried before. The workshop was excellent and improved my understanding of the form. I also submitted a poem and attended a critique group on July 5th.

Cannon Mine Poets: The Cannon Mine Poets group in Lafayette is hosted by Larry LaVerdure and in June featured Douglas Jackson who had mentorships with the poets Yakshi Vadeboncoeur and Will Staple in Camptonville, California. Doug writes about his wanderings in the Sierra Nevada Mountains, the Mojave Desert, and the Rocky Mountains. I admired his work and his style of reading aloud.

Naropa Poetry Readings: In June, Naropa holds the Summer Writing Program. I attended readings by both students and visiting faculty on different evenings.

2.    Finish my first novel and query agents (IW): Nothing accomplished.

3.    Finish my second novel (G): Nothing accomplished.

4.    Continue to work on my third novel (PW): Nothing accomplished.

5.    Continue to develop a network of kindred spirits in the world of writing and publishing:

Boulder Writers Alliance: I attended our monthly happy hour. I also enjoyed Gary Alan McBride’s Writers Who Read session in which we discussed Margo’s Got Money Troubles by Rufi Thorpe—a book that merits an attentive read.

Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers: I read the newsletter.

Women Writing the West: I registered for the upcoming online conference. Our critique group did not meet.

6.  Document my writing progress through my blog and post it on the seventh day of each month, one blog per month in 2025:

Today is July 7, 2025. I am posting my seventh blog for this year. Boulder has had an unusually rainy May and June, thus the foothills and surrounding areas have been a vibrant dark green. I live in a beautiful area for hiking and being outdoors. As I watch the news of devastating storms and floods across the nation and the world, my goal of lowering my personal carbon footprint becomes stronger. I drive as rarely as possible and I haven’t flown anywhere for about five years.

A Poem for July

The Hunter

By William Carlos Williams (1883–1963)

In the flashes and black shadows
of July
the days, locked in each other’s arms,
seem still
so that squirrels and colored birds
go about at ease over
the branches and through the air.

Where will a shoulder split or
a forehead open and victory be?

Nowhere.
Both sides grow older.

And you may be sure
not one leaf will lift itself
from the ground
and become fast to a twig again.

Writing and Gardening

The two greatest pleasures of my life are writing and gardening. I write every day of the week, every week of the month, and every month of each year. Every day, I write a gratitude and compassion journal, work on poetry, and edit and fine-tune one of the novels I have been working on. My monthly meetings with my critique partner are a pleasure and contribute to the development of my knowledge and proficiency.

Since I live in a summer/winter climate, my gardening is limited to the late spring and early fall but I have a huge flower garden behind my house and smaller ones on the north and east. My favorite flowers are sunflowers and zinnias, but my large garden is resplendent with perennials including iris, roses, columbines of multiple colors, lazy Susans, daisies, lavender, and marigolds. One of the glories of my landscape is an old and huge rhododendron bush with gorgeous lavender blossoms. I also plant a tiny vegetable garden in the summer and enjoy having fresh vegetables on hand.

Parallels that exist in these two different interests are profound. Both writing and gardening require consistency and commitment. They both require consultation and constant research and learning. Both writing and gardening keep me involved with talented and supportive individuals with whom I love to communicate. And, best of all, both writing and gardening contribute to my mental and physical health and stamina. My research, writing, editing, critique groups, readings, and conferences keep me informed and engaged in a community of writers. Bending over in the garden, pulling weeds, harvesting vegetables, and dragging a heavy, long hose from the front to the back of the house are activities that keep me strong and limber. Being outdoors cheers me up, clears my mind, improves my breathing, and assures my nights are spent in restful repose.

I encourage my readers to engage in what interests them on both a personal, group, and community level. Engagement leads to a long, pleasant, and fulfilling life.

My Writing Goals for 2025

  1. Continue to develop my poetry and connections with other poets:

Bardic Trails: The Talking Gourds/Bardic Trails is a monthly Zoom presentation of poets, followed by an open mic, which is broadcast from Telluride, Colorado. The well-loved Art Goodtimes is the host. This month, the invited speaker was Juliana Aragón Fatula, who has been a writer in residence for the Colorado Humanities Writers in the Schools Program and who is a member of the Sandra Cisneros Macondo Foundation. The diversity of poets who read during the open mic is entertaining. I read one of my poems.

The Colorado Poetry Center: In May, at the CPC in-person, evening session at the Boulder Bookstore hosted by Beth Franklin, Mary Crow, an American poet, translator, and professor who served as poet laureate of Colorado for 14 years read from her extensive work. Mary Crow has been recognized by the Arts and Colorado Council on the Arts, the Colorado Book Award, a Translation Award from Columbia University, a National Endowment for the Humanities fellowship to New York University, and three NEH summer seminars. Jack Martin also read that evening. Jack taught junior high and high school English for around twenty years. He is a graduate of the MFA program at Colorado State University and his poems have appeared in many magazines. Jack Martin also received the Colorado Council on the Arts Poetry Award. I enjoyed the open mic readings that evening as well and stepped up to read a poem myself.

The Boulder Writers Alliance Poetry Circle: In May, BWA featured Stan Deetz. Stan is a Professor Emeritus and was a President’s Teaching Scholar at the University of Colorado, Boulder. He has been a featured presenter at Queer Art Organics and participated in open mic readings at Junkyard Social Club, Trident, the Coffee Stand, and the Colorado Poets Center Open Mics at the Boulder Bookstore. In 2024, Stan published a prose and poetry memoir Between….by TransGender Publishing.

Columbine Poets: I recently joined Columbine Poets and attended an online poetry critique group with the group this week. The poets in the group are knowledgeable and give inspired feedback and suggestions.

Cannon Mine Poets: Over the last year, I have also been attending the Cannon Mine Poets group in Lafayette which is hosted by Larry LaVerdure and also has an open mic session. In May, Connie Boyle, winner of the Colorado Authors League 2012 poetry award, presented a reading.

My poetry project goals: I managed to write a new poem every week over the last month and submitted one to a contest. I also attended the Poetry Rodeo in Denver this month and took an insightful workshop on writing poetry led by Julie Cumming whose work I admire.

  1. Finish my first novel and query agents (IW): I went through all my files and moved them into different folders to create seven draft segments of the novel.
  1. Finish my second novel (G): Nothing accomplished here.
  1. Continue to work on my third novel (PW): Nothing accomplished here.
  1. Continue to develop a network of kindred spirits in the world of writing and publishing:
  1. Boulder Writers Alliance: I hosted the BWA Poetry Circle which featured Stan Deetz but missed the BWA Happy Hour because I had company from abroad.
  2. Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers:  I read the newsletter and various emails. I also worked on a potential submission to the anthology.
  3. Women Writing the West: I read the newsletter and listserv.
  4. Document my writing progress through my blog and post it on the seventh day of each month, one blog per month in 2025:

Today is June 7, 2025. I am posting my sixth blog for this year. May, and so far June, have been extremely damp in Colorado. Rainfall on the Front Range has exceeded typical late May and June weather in Seattle and Portland—which may be a first. I took a drive this week and was astounded at the intense green of the fields and foliage in Boulder County. I don’t think I have ever seen such an emerald landscape here in our high-altitude desert. It made me wonder why green is not seen as the color of love.

A Poem for June

The Best Thing in the World

By Elizabeth Barrett Browning

What’s the best thing in the world?
June-rose, by May-dew impearled;
Sweet south-wind, that means no rain;
Truth, not cruel to a friend;
Pleasure, not in haste to end;
Beauty, not self-decked and curled
Till its pride is over-plain;
Light, that never makes you wink;
Memory, that gives no pain;
Love, when, so, you’re loved again.
What’s the best thing in the world?
— Something out of it, I think.–

Sadness and Grief Wrapped in Splendor

The passing of Pope Francis has had a touching impact on people from all levels of society and all religions. He was a gentle and honest man who chose to live without ostentation or wealth. Although as pope, he had no special political power, during his lifetime he was welcomed by political leaders from around the world and by leaders of most religions. Thus, his funeral was attended by leaders, kings, queens, and other royalty as well as by many of his followers and admirers. Today the papal conclave began to choose the new pope as the world awaits in anticipation. At the end of the day, the smoke emitted was black, indicating that a new pope had not yet been selected. Even though I am not Catholic, I admire the life and work of Pope Francis and look forward to a new leader with a heart as big as his. Even after his death, his impact will be felt by the people of Gaza to whom he requested that his popemobile to be remade for medical service.

My favorite movie over the past year was Conclave which featured Ralph Fiennes, Stanley Tucci, John Lithgow, Sergio Castellitto, and Isabella Rossellini. I thought the acting was splendid. The setting and the costumes were beautiful. I was disappointed that it didn’t win every category at the Oscars but appreciated that fact that the Screen Actors Guild awarded the cast The Outstanding Cast in a Motion Picture Award in 2025. If you haven’t seen Conclave, now is the perfect time to view it.

My Writing Goals for 2025

  1. Continue to develop my poetry and connections with other poets:
  2. Bardic Trails: The Talking Gourds/Bardic Trails is a monthly Zoom presentation of poets, followed by an open mike, which is broadcast from Telluride, Colorado. This month, the presentation took place on May 6. Two poets presented their work: Ellery Akers who has published multiple books of poetry and whose A Door into the Wild won the 2024 Blue Light Book Award and a silver medal in the 2024 North American Book Award in Poetry and Benny Manibog who won the 2024 Cantor Prize for his poem, “Honeycombs.” I genuinely enjoy the Bardic Trails open mike session as the poets who read are excellent. This month, I read my poem “Winning Horses” in the open mike session.
  3. The Colorado Poetry Center: In April, Michael J. Henry, who is the Executive Director of Lighthouse and who has published two collections of poetry, No Stranger Than My Own and Active Gods, and a book of nonfiction, Mountain Biking the Colorado Trail, read at the CPC evening session at the Boulder Bookstore. I enjoyed the open mike readings that evening as well.
  4. The Boulder Writers Alliance Poetry Circle featured Lorrie E. Wolfe. Her second chapbook, The Language of Crows, won the Middle Creek Press 2023 Fledge Chapbook Award and was nominated for a Pushcart Prize. Lorrie’s work has been widely published in journals and anthologies. Lorrie was also named Poet of the Year at the Ziggies Poetry Festival in Denver.
  • My poetry project goals: I managed to write a new poem every week over the last month and plan to submit one to a contest.
  • Finish my first novel and query agents (IW):  I attended a BWA Silent Writing Group session and discussed my synopsis at my critique group.
  • Finish my second novel (G): Nothing accomplished.
  • Continue to work on my third novel, (PW: Nothing accomplished.

Continue to develop a network of kindred spirits in the world of writing and publishing:

  1. Boulder Writers Alliance:  I was unable to attend the BWA’s Writers Who Read discussion of Butcher by Joyce Carol Oates, led by Gary Alan McBride. This was a difficult book for me to read. I had to reread the first three parts three times to make my mind focus on the story. It is rare that I dislike a book and almost throw it across the room but I did not like this book.
  2. Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers:  I read the newsletter and various emails. I also started a draft of a potential submission to the anthology.
  3. Women Writing the West: I read the newsletter and attended our critique group. I do plan to attend the online/virtual WWW Conference this year.
  4. Document my writing progress through my blog and post it on the seventh day of each month, one blog per month in 2025:

Today is May 7, 2025. I am posting my fifth blog for this year. When I was a child, on May Day, we prepared little May baskets for older ladies in the neighborhood and left them on their doorstep as a surprise. It was fun to know that they didn’t know who left them. Once as an adult, I had someone leave me a May basket which was a pleasure and brought back memories of my childhood. I never discovered who left it! This month, I have had visitors from abroad which has been a delight.

A Poem for May

May Baskets

         —Annette Wynne

In other lands the children bring

May baskets for the first of spring,

And hang them on a lady’s door

To say that spring is here once more;

And when the lady comes to see

What all the sound outside may be,

She’s glad; that’s the way

The Swedish children keep the May.

But we can do kind things and sing

And tell our way the joy of spring.

Though April Showers May Come Our Way…Americans Love Democracy

We are one week into April and I have been humbled and pleased by the bravery of so many Americans across the country who have joined protest marches in support of democracy. While I have read that these protests have not been widely published about nor on the front pages of mainstream newspapers, they are covered quite well on Facebook, CGNTEurope is covering the protests. I have contributed some cash to some marches but have not attended one. Many of my friends have attended local and state protests and have found the process uplifting. It is also thrilling to observe the marches taking place in other countries in support of American democracy.

As we are living in a moment where democratic principles are being challenged and sometime ignored, I decided to review and comment on the key principles of our American Constitution.

The five key principles include: the separation of powers, checks and balances, federalism, and popular sovereignty. The separation of powers deliberately divides governmental authority among the legislative, executive, and judicial branches to prevent a single branch from becoming too powerful. The principle of checks and balances allows each branch of the government to limit the power of the other two branches. The concept of federalism divides the power between the federal government and the state governments. The fourth principle, popular sovereignty, states that the government derives its power from the people. And, the fifth principle, limited government establishes that the government’s power is restricted by the Constitution—the government must not act arbitrarily.a

So, if you support our democratic procedures and the separation of powers, now might be a suitable time to let your thoughts and voices be heard. Writers Unite: Take Up the Fight!

My Writing Goals for 2025

  1. Continue to develop my poetry and connections with other poets:
  2. Bardic Trails: The Talking Gourds/Bardic Trails is a monthly Zoom presentation of poets, followed by an open mike, which is broadcast from Telluride, Colorado. This month, the presentation took place on April Fool’s Day but suffering from the fool’s part of the day, I forgot to log on.
  3. The Colorado Poetry Center: The poet who read at the CPC session in the middle of March, Christina A. Bejan, is a local. She presented with professional actors several scenes from her anthology of plays: “Finally Quiet: Four Plays from Bucharest to Washington DC.”
  4. The Boulder Writers Alliance Poetry Circle featured Gregory Seth Harris who read from his impressive narrative poems. Seth has recently published an audio book of his poetry book, A Black Odyssey, on Spotify.
  5. My poetry project goals: I managed to write a new poem every week over the last month and plan to submit one to a contest.
  6. Finish my first novel and query agents (IW):  I attended a BWA Silent Writing Group session and managed to make some progress over this month on this novel.
  7. Finish my second novel (G): Nothing accomplished on this manuscript.
  8. Continue to work on my third novel, (PW): I read and corrected several pages of notes on my topic.

Continue to develop a network of kindred spirits in the world of writing and publishing:

  1. Boulder Writers Alliance:  I attended the BWA’s Writers Who Read discussion of Burma Sahib by Paul Theroux—an informative and engaging read. It is a novelized biography of Eric Arthur Blair whose penname was George Orwell, the author of Nineteen Eighty-Four. Curiously, the beginning sentence of the novel is: “It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.”

2. Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers:  I read the newsletter and various emails. I also started a draft of a potential submission to the anthology. The RMFW Gold Conference takes place this year in September: https://rmfw.org/conference/

3. Women Writing the West: I read the newsletter and attended our critique group. The WWW Virtual Conference this year takes place October. If you are interested, you can check it out at:

4. Document my writing progress through my blog and post it on the seventh day of each month, one blog per month in 2025:

Today is April 7, 2025. I am posting my fourth blog for this year. April is, of course, tax month so I have devoted many hours to tax preparation and submission. However, I have also had time to write. After having new snowfall on the ground over the weekend, today I took a drive and was thrilled to see white blossoms on some trees, white trees with red blossoms, pale green baby leaves popping out on bushes and trees all along the way, and tulips tipping their tops in the breeze. Spring is finally here!

Some Lines from a Favorite Poem

The Waste Land

            —T.S. Elliott

April is the cruelest month

breeding lilacs out of the dead land, mixing

Memory and desire, stirring

Dull roots with spring rain”…

March Weather and Our Lives

In the Boulder foothills, March came in like a lamb—not like a lion. The first day of March was a beautiful, sunny day with blue skies, and the temperature reached 61 degrees Fahrenheit. Later that week, the temperature topped out at 35 degrees with snow. Wherever you live, these drastic March weather variations are likely to be commonplace.

Ralph Waldo Emerson famously said, “Our life is March weather, savage and serene in one hour.” His quote is reflected not only in fluctuating meteorological conditions and in our personal lives, but also in current local and national events. This month my usually reliable writing time was shortened with the need to spend three days buying and setting up a new computer, then shortly thereafter having it compromised by hackers, and having to spend more than a week clearing up the resulting mess with my bank and various other financial groups.

Likewise, since January 20, national events have felt like March weather—difficulties, surprises, and shocks. The whole country is upset. There has been an explosion of local marches in every state of the union, as well as protest marches against fascism in other countries. Citizens in the USA are protesting current national policies that are destructive to individuals, businesses, and freedoms which we all value.

Our area had its own protest this week because staff positions were slashed at the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration. NOAA is the national group that builds, as their website states: “… a Weather-Ready Nation by providing better information for better decisions to save lives and livelihoods.” The weather information our cell phones display comes from NOAA. Given climate change and the increase in flooding, fires, and other dramatic weather events worldwide, firing experts endangers the lives of Americans and individuals elsewhere. Laying off so many workers undermines the economy. People need salaries to pay their rent, buy food, and pay taxes.

As I post this blog, we are only one week into the month; the Ides of March will soon be upon us. Most folks know the expression “Beware the Ides of March” but do they know to what it refers? Shakespeare wrote the line, a warning spoken by a soothsayer, into his play Julius Caesar. Caesar ignored the fortune-teller’s portent and was subsequently assassinated on the fifteenth of March—the middle of the month. This year, March 15 falls on a Saturday. I am always extra careful on the Ides of March, while at the same time being happy that spring is creeping closer.

Given the current political situation, I encourage writers to make their viewpoints known and support democracy: Writers Unite; Take Up the Fight!

My Writing Goals for 2025

  1. Continue to develop my poetry and connections with other poets:
  2. Bardic Trails: The Talking Gourds/Bardic Trails is a monthly Zoom presentation of poets, followed by an open mike, that comes out Telluride, Colorado. This month, Teow Lim Goh presented her poetry which focused on Chinese workers in Wyoming during a period when they were harassed, murdered, and had their settlement destroyed by local white men. Goh illuminated a shocking period of Western US history that was unknown to me.
  3. The Colorado Poetry Center: I didn’t make it to a CPC reading this month but did attend an exceptional reading by the Irish Poet, Pádraig Ó Tuama, at the Denver Public Library. I purchased and enjoyed reading his book, Kitchen Poems.
  4. The Boulder Writers Alliance Poetry Circle featured Brenda Wildrick, a Colorado poet who has published several poetry books including On the Train for Somewhere Else and two coloring books, The Color of Hope and Seasons of Resplendent Color which feature a haiku poem with each image. Brenda’s poetry ranges from the poignant to the political.
  5. My poetry project goals: Despite the interruptions, I’ve managed to write a new poem each week so far this year.
  6. Finish my first novel and query agents (IW): I had no new pages in hand to share with my critique group but I provided feedback on the pages presented to me.
  7. Finish my second novel (G): I had no time to work on this manuscript this month.
  8. Continue to work on my third novel, (PW): I discussed drilling accidents with a knowledgeable person.

Continue to develop a network of kindred spirits in the world of writing and publishing:

  1. Boulder Writers Alliance:  I attended the BWA’s Writers Who Read discussion of James by Percival Everett, led by Gary Alan McBride. Everett’s use of diction to demonstrate differences in position and power was impressive. I also joined our February BWA Happy Hour for an engaging and informative discussion with other writers. I appreciated Brenda Wildrick’s riveting poetry reading for our BWA Poetry Circle.

2. Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers:  I read the newsletter and various emails. The RMFW Gold Conference takes place this year in September: https://rmfw.org/conference/

3. Women Writing the West: I read the newsletter and attended our critique group. The WWW Virtual Conference this year takes place in October: https://www.womenwritingthewest.org/conference/

4. Document my writing progress through my blog and post it on the seventh day of each month, one blog per month in 2025:

Today is March 7, 2025. I am posting my third blog for this year. After a frigid February, it is nice to have lighter skies, longer days, and intermittent warmer temperatures. I have enjoyed the talented poets and writers that I have met with this month.

Some Lines from a Favorite Poem

My academic degrees (BA, MA, PhD) are all in French Literature. Guillaume Apollinaire (1880–1918) has always been one of my favorite French poets. Here are the opening lines of one of his poems in French, followed by my personal translation of these lines of his poem into English:

Sous le Pont Mirabeau

Sous le pont Mirabeau coule la Seine
  Et nos amours
     Faut-il qu’il m’en souvienne
La joie venait toujours après la peine

           Vienne la nuit sonne l’heure
           Les jours s’en vont je demeure

Under the Pont Mirabeau

Under the Pont Mirabeau flows the Seine
And our loves
Must I remember
That joy has always appeared after pain

Let the night come and the hour ring
Days drift away yet I remain.

Living and Blogging in Distressing Times

 

Each of us is an individual. Most of us have a devoted family. We have close friends. We belong to groups and organizations that we love. Personally, at the family level in the last two years, I have lost the three people closest to me which has been heartrending and leaves me with no one whom I can talk to at any minute I so choose. At the friendship level, I am in a book club that I started with a friend several decades ago. Our group, which has been meeting on Zoom since the Covid lockdown, is an intimate and supportive group of women. We all know each other’s life stories and have known each other’s partners and children as well. For this group who loves to read and discuss literature, I am thankful. I am in another women’s group in which one year we host and the following year we present a paper. The papers expand my knowledge into areas that are often unknown to me. As a professional, I have participated in several organizations. Thus, I have a strong professional network of individuals that I can trust and talk to about many different issues.

 Currently, I am a member of the Boulder Writers Alliance which provides around ten different activities for members each month. The group is fascinating in that the age span of men and women involved varies from the twenties to the eighties. We have a book discussion group, a meet for drinks and dinner to continue the discussion group, a poetry group, a happy hour group, several critique groups, and several silent writing groups. Participating in groups that have a focus on writing is a fulfilling activity for me as I learn so much from the others.

Family, friends, and professional colleagues are a delight in happy times. They provide inspiration, collaboration, and support. Our small and large networks of reliable and likable people are essential to our well-being. Participation and sharing build our skills and our sense of belonging. Remember this, and rely on your, as the French say, “semblables” during the stressful days and months that our nation is encountering as I write this blog.

My Writing Goals for 2025

1.  Continue to develop my poetry and connections with other poets: I forgot to log on to Bardic Trails in February and thus missed the presentation by Wendy Videlock who is the Western Slope Poet Laureate, however, I did read her books. The Colorado Poetry Center monthly readings which feature a poet, have an open mike, and take place at the Boulder Bookstore have been enjoyable. The Boulder Writers Alliance Poetry Circle featured Abigail Seber who has published three full-length books of poetry. Abigail combines physics, painting, and poetry. As for my poetry project goals, I have managed to write one poem each week so far in 2025.

2.  Finish my first novel and query agents (IW): I met with my critique group and presented a new section.

3.  Finish my second novel, (G): I did not work on this novel this month.

4.  Continue to work on my third novel, (PW): I did not work on this novel this month.

5.  Continue to develop a network of kindred spirits in the world of writing and publishing:

a.  Boulder Writers Alliance:  I attended BWA’s Writers Who Read discussion, led by Gary Alan McBride, of Good Material by Dolly Alderton. The critical content of the discussion was quite knowledgeable. Our January BWA Happy Hour was entertaining. I did not attend a silent writing session this month. I organized the BWA Poetry Circle for both January (which featured Abigail Seber) and February which will feature Brenda Wildrick.

b.  Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers:  I read the newsletter and various emails.

c. Women Writing the West: I read the newsletter and attended our critique group.

6. Document my writing progress through my blog and post it on the seventh day of each month, one blog per month in 2025:

Today is February 7, 2025. I am posting my second blog for this year. My original positive outlook for 2025 has been squelched by shocking political events over the last few weeks. As I try to remain calm so that I can focus on my writing, I feel compelled to follow the national news. My advice is: Writers Unite; Take Up the Fight!—but find your compatriots in writers who write for democracy.

Some Lines from the Poem Bibliography by Nikki Giovanni (1943–2024)

There is a bat

In Chile named

Micronyteris giovanniae

Dr. Robert Baker named it

After me. He discovered it

While studying bats

And thought the big ears

Were just like me

Maybe if the bat wrote

She would be

A poet

Radical Acts of Optimism

I enjoy watching the award shows for cinema—the European Film Awards, the Golden Globes, and the Oscars. Because Emilia Perez won Best Film, Best Director, Best Actress, Best Screen Writer, and Best Editing late in 2024 at the European Film Awards, I streamed the film to watch it. It is a powerful story. This week, it was also awarded Golden Globes for Best Musical or Comedy and Best Non-English Language Film, Best Supporting Actress, and Best Original Song. 

When Jon M. Chu accepted the award for Cinematic and Box Office Success at the Golden Globes for his film, Wicked, he made an inspirational comment that caught my ear, he said, “a radical act of optimism.” For the rest of 2025, I will keep this statement in my awareness and attempt to be a writer who engages in radical acts of optimism.

What will I be optimistic about? My writing, my life, and the world around me. I noticed recently that I tell myself, “I have to write.” I realized that it sounds like a command, so I will change this statement to “I love to write and I will reserve time to do so.” My life has been quite different over the last two years because of the death of loved ones. This year, I will be more appreciative of all my living loved ones and let them know that I think about them and love them. Given the shift in politics in the world around me, I have wondered what is wrong with average citizens who make terrible choices in elections. This year, I will focus on clarifying traditional democratic values when I can do so.

My Writing Goals for 2025

1.  Continue to develop my poetry and connections with other poets: Attend Bardic Trails, Cannon Mine Poetry, the Colorado Poetry Center events, and the Naropa events. I will also lead the BWA Poetry Circle and write one poem each week.

2.  Finish my first novel and query agents( IW): Reorganize to clarify the plot and the storyline for each character, write necessary chapters, and edit existing chapters to fit the reorganization.

3.  Finish my second novel, (G): Reorganize to clarify the plot and the storyline for each character, write necessary chapters, and edit existing chapters to fit the reorganization.

4.  Continue to work on my third novel, (PW): Reorganize to clarify the plot and the storyline for each character, write necessary chapters, and edit existing chapters to fit the reorganization.

5.  Continue to develop a network of kindred spirits in the world of writing and publishing:

a.  Boulder Writers Alliance: Attend Writers Who Read, the BWA Happy Hour, at least one silent writing session each month, and organize and lead the BWA Poetry Circle: I attended our first meeting of Gary Alan McBride’s Writers Who Read 2025 which provided a detailed analysis of Kaveh Akbar’s Martyr!

b.  Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers: Pay dues and follow the newsletter.

c. Women Writing the West: Attend the online conference and continue to work with our critique group each month.

6. Document my writing progress through my blog and post it on the seventh day of each month, one blog per month in 2025:

Today is January 7, 2025. I am posting my first blog for this year. Despite my concerns about national politics, I am feeling positive and hopeful for 2025—I like the number! I am more comfortable in my own skin than I have ever been. I enjoy my friends and colleagues. I appreciate the wonderful individuals that I have met and worked with this past year and look forward to deepening these relationships. I enjoy the service activities that I accomplish. My knowledge of the local and state-wide poetry world has broadened considerably. The Zoom workshop I lead through the Boulder Writers Alliance Poetry Circle offers the opportunity to meet and collaborate with amazing poets. The other organizations I belong to offer friendship and remarkable connections.

A Line from an Inspirational Poem

When I was a high school senior, I represented my school at the State Speech Meet. The poem that I recited from memory was Renascence by Edna St. Vincent Millay—a serious poem for a seventeen-year-old. Here are a few lines from this long poem:

From Renascence (1917)

“…I know not how such things can be;
I only know there came to me
A fragrance such as never clings
To aught save happy living things;
A sound as of some joyous elf
Singing sweet songs to please himself…”

May you, my reader, sing happy tunes to yourself throughout the coming year!

Lessons in Writing

Bonnie Garmus, the author of Lessons in Chemistry, and an enthusiastic supporter of libraries was the featured speaker at the local Boulder Public Library Gala in September. With attendance at close to 400 supporters, our Boulder Writers Alliance group was fortunate to have good seats close to the dais. Maeve Conran from KGNU conducted an insightful interview with Bonnie. The interview will be broadcast on October 24, 2024, at 9 AM, on KGNU Community Radio 88.5 FM on Radio Book Club, a collaboration between KGNU and the Boulder Bookstore.

The next morning, I joined a small group from the Library Foundation and their supporters to meet with Bonnie for breakfast at a local venue. Bonnie spoke about how important both the school librarians and the local public librarians in her town were to her as a child. Her interest in reading and writing blossomed under the guidance of attentive librarians who gave her interesting tasks to do. Thus, she has chosen to be an active supporter of libraries as an adult. Throughout her career, Bonnie worked as a copywriter. Honing her skills for editing and accuracy proved invaluable to her work as a novelist. She added that her experience in marketing was beneficial when she began to collaborate with her publisher. She also emphasized that she goes through many drafts before publishing—up to fifty! I am looking forward to her next publication.

My Writing Goals for 2024

Continue to develop my poetry and connections with other poets:

This past month, the Jaipur Literary Festival Colorado was held at the local public library. I attended several sessions with visiting and local poets, including Rohan Chhetri, Jovan Mays, Reiland Rabaka, and Anne Waldman.

I also participated in a workshop at Naropa University led by Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer who was San Miguel County’s Poet Laureate from 2007-2011 and the Western Slope Poet Laureate from 2015-2017. Moudi Sbeity, a poet who is a writing instructor at Naropa University, joined Rosemerry for the session. The following evening, they both read their work at the Colorado Poetry Center’s reading at the Boulder Bookstore. I found both the workshop and the reading to be exceptionally warm, personal, and instructive.

I also attended Bardic Trails, a program on the Western Slope, on Zoom. This month it featured Eirene Hamilton, a poet who writes in both Diné Bizaad and English. Eirene’s integration of nature, humor, and her people’s culture into her poetry was delightful.

Additionally, I invited David Jilk to present for the Boulder Writers Alliance Poetry Circle in September. He discussed and read from his newest publication. Dave is the author of Epoch: A Poetic Psy-Phi Saga, two collections of lyric poetry, co-author of The Entrepreneur’s Weekly Nietzsche: A Book for Disruptors, and lead or co-author of several academic papers on cognitive neuroscience and on existential concerns related to artificial intelligence.

Finish my first novel and query agents:

I drafted new pages for my critique group.

Continue to work on my second novel:

I did not work on this book this month.

Continue to work on my third novel:

Our new BWA literary critique group met to work together. Three of us were present on Zoom and we all expressed our appreciation for each other’s work. We also made comments and made helpful suggestions.

Continue to develop a network of kindred spirits in the world of writing and publishing:

Boulder Writers Alliance: I attended the BWA Happy Hour in September and our Writers Who Read session led by Gary Allen McBride this week in which we had a lively discussion of Ann Patchett’s Tom Lake.

Denver Woman’s Press Club: I read the newsletter and decided which sessions I could attend this fall.

Rocky Mountain Fiction Writers:  I read the newsletter and followed the RMFW Colorado Gold Conference on Facebook.

Women Writing the West: I am looking forward to the annual conference which takes place this month. I sent in my pages for the critique group being held at the conference.

Document my writing progress through my blog and post it on the seventh day of each month, one blog per month in 2024:

Today is October 7, 2024. I am posting my tenth blog of 2024. September was beautiful and mostly warm. Because of our exceptionally warm autumn, my flower garden is still in full bloom today, adding color and richness to my days.

Writers who were born in October that I particularly enjoy:

Jill Kerr Conway, e. e. cummings, Fyodor Mikhailovich Dostoevsky, Ursula K. Le Guin, Doris Lessing, Katherine Mansfield, François Mauriac, Terry McMillan, Arthur Miller, Ivan Turgenev, and Oscar Wilde

Poets that I admire who were born in October:

John Keats, Sylvia Plath, Arthur Rimbaud, Wallace Stevens, and Dylan Thomas